Going Academic

Dear (3) readers... I have done it, I've written a crappy paper! Now don't get me wrong, I believe the work is worthy but it is my first and the writing may crap the bed, so to say.  Here's is where you come in and peer review the living feces out of it, hopefully.

Here is the link: https://github.com/xs-admin/Excess/blob/master/Doc/Excess.pdf

Compliments are great and I'll take them, but the real useful stuff is if you get real mean and tell me why none of that works.